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such a long time to hurt
those scars must be hurting
and these wounds never really healed
the blood ust keeps pouring
but you never bleed out
some force keeping you alive
making you suffer
you make yourself forget for now
but you wonder what's missing
a part of you is gone
and then it's back
and you cry yet again
*see title*
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Necrowdancer's avatar
:hug: I really like your poetry...It's so dark and mysterious... Mine used to be that way, back when my heart was shattered by my dear mum...Back when I couldn't write so well at all...Yours is like the way I used to...still feel...How my true feelings are deep inside...the ones I try so hard to hide...Yet, I fail when I read something that decribes them...Becuse it reminds me that I am lying... This is perhaps the reason why I am drawn to your poetry...Either that, or I just really like the way they flow and the way that I could never find any peoms like them...