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The perfect storm.
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And sometimes,
I catch myself,
And then,
When I have stopped falling,
I stand,
Perfectly still,
And I wait,
For the storm to come,
But it never does,
I wait,
For an excuse,
To break down,
But I never get one,
I am watching,
And I am,
Listening,
And I am,
Waiting,
For it to hit me.
I catch myself,
And then,
When I have stopped falling,
I stand,
Perfectly still,
And I wait,
For the storm to come,
But it never does,
I wait,
For an excuse,
To break down,
But I never get one,
I am watching,
And I am,
Listening,
And I am,
Waiting,
For it to hit me.
.
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damn >//< three clicks three hits
whenever I read something in your gallery I automatically have to fave it XDD''
it's just too good *__*
this time:
lines 1-10 could be a songtext *__* like loose myself by depeche mode
I somehow find "explode" (l.12) too harsh. It doesn't match with storm and falling in my opinion. Maybe you'd take rather thunder and/or lightning, that would fit better and be tighter connected to the storm
but it's great after all
X3
I'm looking forward to reading more , yes I do ^^
whenever I read something in your gallery I automatically have to fave it XDD''
it's just too good *__*
this time:
lines 1-10 could be a songtext *__* like loose myself by depeche mode
I somehow find "explode" (l.12) too harsh. It doesn't match with storm and falling in my opinion. Maybe you'd take rather thunder and/or lightning, that would fit better and be tighter connected to the storm
but it's great after all
X3
I'm looking forward to reading more , yes I do ^^